Reviewed by Jason

God has a little problem He wants answered. So He pops down to Earth to find a solution. A little knowledge is a dangerous thing. The answer God finds is not to His advantage.

The theology is suspect and to those with strong Christian beliefs it's most likely blasphemous. A few minor scientific inaccuracies, but they don't detract from the overall flow of the story.

The idea behind the story is inherently funny, but rapidly becoming cliche. This story brings an interesting slant to the basic idea.

The story is told through narrative with little characterization. the humor could be better illustrated through God's interaction with others. The use of Bill Gates is gratuitous and has no bearing on the story. None of the opportunities for satire are explored.

For all these flaws I still found it entertaining. With a little more attention to detail the story could become great.