Reviewed by Robert

Already, even before this review is up I am getting some concern over my selection of a quill for this story. The subject chosen is a tough one to write well and keep the feel consistant with its time point. The author has succeeded in that much. The tale is simple and easy to follow. There are a few problems with repetition that I was prepared to over look as well as a major error in the wrong name used in one scene.

Perhaps it is best to understand the meaning of the quill here: This was not a brilliant work but it was a solid piece of writing. The characters moved well together, the story was tight and we were not overloaded with information not relevent to the scenes. To me this is good.

For the author I can now suggest that they tackle harder subject matter and increase complexities within the story plot. A hard thing to do if you can't get even the simplest of tales correct.

Well Done and good writing.