Reviewed by Jason

This is a very difficult story to review due to its brevity. By the time you begin to grasp what is going on the story is finished. Added to the complexity of the story is the possibility of typing errors.

An example. The first sentence, 'When the friend of Joseph K. had chosen That to be demented, he didnt knew.' Is this meant to be 'know'? or did the author deliberately chose 'knew'. Either word can work, but the meaning of the sentence is entirely different depending on which word you use.

I can't tell whether the above example is a typo or deliberate as the following sentence has 'asking' spelt 'aksing'. The story would be difficult to grasp at the best of times. The uncertainty created by possible typos makes it nigh impossible. What this story needs more then anything is proof reading. Most other things would fall into place after this.