Reviewed by Nicole

This story was a non stop laugh! Two brothers are back together trying to pull a job and successfully do so until the cops show up. This story ends like no other- funny and quick. This story is written in an interesting way as well. Although there is not much description about surroundings, that is not the point of focus here. The dialogue between these two men catches the readers attention and leads them through the hilarious events leading to the police's arrival. I feel this piece would make a good story for a variety of different magazines. (Even for readers digest minus the underwear incident!)