Reviewed by Robert

From the very start I was caught in Ken's trap. You couldn't walk away from this story even if you wanted to go to the toilet. Ken's writing is very smooth and his humor quite subtle in places. He has taken toilet humour to new hights or is that lows?

There was a nice little bit of Cheech and Chong suggestion in here that gave me a bit of a look at the man called Ken. Careful Ken, I'm a poet and I often see far more than words. Perhaps one annoying flaw was when the wifes admission came, it was out of place with her earlier panic, fear and revulsion. Well done and very well written as always. Many writers can learn a agreat deal from this mans writing, I certainly am. Not quite a quill but more a flapping piece of toilet paper and a yellowed toilet brush.