Reviewed by Kate
I hate history
Reviewed by Kate I hate history
Michelle is studying Greek Gods before she goes to sleep. She wonders if they really existed, and she soon gets an answer. While she's sleeping (or is she?) she meets a couple of them, and the outcome is not at all favorable.
This story was written by the same author as Teddy Talk, and some of the problems pointed out by the reviewer of that story have been bypassed in this one. There is more action here, and not so much storytelling through dialogue, and I think the result is a better story.
One paragraph has too many "beautiful"s, and there are a few places where the dialogue could use some commas, but these things are easily fixed. Michelle's realization of what is happening to her comes a little too late, since Zeus pronounces her sentence a few paragraphs earlier.
I always hated math, I wonder what terrible fate Hayley would dream up for me?
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