Reviewed by Robert

In The Beginning Man Created


This is not the first story of Jason's I have read but I would say it is one of his better ones. The main characters move nicly together giving the reader the feeling of being there. But some characterization of garret would have added to his demise and created a greater feeling for him. The main character is a little to cold towards garrat's fate and I found this bit unbelievable. This story sounded rushed at the end and I was diapointed that the main character wasn't developed a bit more. I understood what the writer was trying to do with this story and it almost worked.

Well done Jas, this is a good solid read.

Story by © Jason R Bleckly

Reviewed by © Robert

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