Reviewed by Janice

It Was An Accident


"It Was An Accident" is the story of two boys, Tony and Dennis, and how a teenage prank gone bad affects their lives.

Without giving away the ending, I'd like to say that the author did a good job in writing this story. It kept my attention and evoked emotion which is a great feat for a writer. However, the ending really only showed one side and left me wondering what the other side would do. I'd love to see how the character worked out his problem.

I also had to question how the part of the story in which the two boys go to Tony's house after the prank is relevant to the story, there is a scene in which Tony's father goes into the bathroom that just doesn't seem to fit. I suggest that the author stick with something that would enhance the story rather than putting something in that really doesn't belong.

Other than that I think this story was written well and has a great plot with a bit of a twist at the end, which makes it even better.

The story is well worth reading and the ending is guaranteed to surprise, I like this aspect.

All in all...Very good job Stu!

Story by © Stu Silver

Reviewed by © Janice

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