Reviewed by Robert

This is a very good story that unfortuantely is let down by its beggining. I fould it a bit bothersome, clumsy for the first page and a bit, then something started to happen. Perhaps that is a good point to actually start the story and fill in some of the room detail with the main characters subsiquent visits back to the room. Good use of old in new setting, remember to keep the language of the main character consistant with his timer point, certain terms and phrasiology may not been in use during the 1800's. Can't be specific I'm afraid.

Over all a very good read from the second page on, nice scene setting and good characterization.

Well done!!!