Reviewed by Mick
I must go
Reviewed by Mick
A group of scientists have discovered a process whereby human kind can utilize their entire brain. The protagonist joins Dr. Ruby, Kevin and James on a roller-coaster ride running from the bad guys who want the technology at any cost.
This story has a nice concept. What would happen if man learned to utilize his entire brain - rather than the small percentage currently exercised? On occasion this tale offers some interesting possibilities on the use of a fully functional brain. Manipulating electricity, mind control, visionary insights and even the ability to start a car.
I'm not sure why the author introduced the character, Helena. She was the love interest in this story and yet she served little or no purpose. I would suggest that the author might drop her from the story and focus on the possibilities of brain power.
The protagonist could also do with a little work. I think that his motivation was a little thin. He was supposedly working at his "new job as a lab assistant". I can tell you that if I saw four thugs murder someone at a job I had just started, the last thing I would be doing is driving off to warn the boss that someone just got murdered.
This story has potential, the concept is strong and interesting. The characters and relationships need developing, the technical details of writing could use some attention, the woman needs to go and a little less action and a little more intrigue would not go astray.
Apart from that - great potential
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