Reviewed by Kate

James is getting married. I'd say he was having some serious second thoughts, after reading Nightmare.

A bit of spell-checking would be a bonus. The story is short, and reminds me of one of last season's Outer Limits, as well as a scene from the movie Prince of Darkness. I'm willing to believe that the author hasn't seen these woman-having-sex-turns-into-hag treatments, I'm just mentioning it because it's a common theme. As is the it-was-just-a-dream-but-hey-it's-gonna-come-true-anyway ending.

Now. If this story had some gripping (and logical) description, (how does he know his hands are turning blue if she's in the middle of kissing him?) or a twist on these tried and true premises, I'd be more interested. Maybe with a few more rewrites, this could be a good story.