Reviewed by Jason

Orgasmatron is enslaved to Lord Herro. his lot for eternity is to slay Lord Herros enemies. He does this for six hundred years, then regains his own volition and ends his torment the only way he can.

There are the makings of a good story in here. What it needs is structure. It wanders from one perspective to another, giving different bits of the story at different times. There is no overall flow. Everything happens in random pockets of activity, some of which seem totally unconected to the others.

A difficult story to read becasue of it's lack of direction. At times I felt I was reading two or three different stories simultaneously.

The title conjures certain images for me, which are totally lacking from the tale. Sex dosen't even get mentioned.

A cut and paste with the computer to put the scences into a coherent pattern would make the story a worthwhile read.