Reviewed by Janice

This is a story of lust and betrayal, I don't like to give the story away in my reviews so I won't say much more. The idea of the story isn't bad but it is a bit of an overused plot. The story could be improved with more characterization and explanation of the end result, perhaps removing the part where the husband wakes up...this part confused me. I like the words used for description at the beginning, and I think with some work and reworking of the plot this would be a great story. Keep writing!