Reviewed by Janice

The Alley is an interesting, albeit predictable, story taken from a rat's point of view. I enjoyed the idea of using a rat's perspective, it was original and I could actually see the alleyway in which the story took place.

If there was anything that could be improved upon in this story, I felt that giving it more suspense would make it much better. From the beginning, I knew what would happen but with a little less narration and a little more action I think it would improve greatly. Take the time to read this unique story, it's worth it.

Good job Aaron.