Reviewed by Janice

Blues Woman


Blues Woman...a somewhat poetic piece.

In all honesty, even after three readings I didn't get it. It looks as if the writer quickly wrote it and sent it with no attention to details such as spelling. I think with a bit more explanation it would be much better.

There are a few nice descriptions, but the story overall needs work. Keep trying!

Story by © Avital Gad Cykman

Reviewed by © Janice

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