Reviewed by Robert

Okay Jas, this story suffers from your typical problem. The Characters are underdeveloped and there are too many. Also, (now for the first time ever) the clones weren't violent enough.

I know why this story is written in the style it is so my view of it is a little tainted. Overall I liked and enjoyed reading it. The main character was likable as well as despicable and I couldn't help but feel some compassion for it in the end. Dark compassion at that. Good points for others to note. One scene change, one major point of view, a small slip with the guy in the lift but it didn't slow the story. One idea with a conclusion. Conflict and resolution, a touch of sexual interest but tactfully left unexplained.

Well done Jason, I wish you well in the contest.