Reviewed by Sonia

A short review for a short work. Not a story but more narrative prose. The author captures the torment of a soul knowing it will lose something it loves, someone not quite held, but loved all the same.

I won�t interpret the piece for you, there is plenty of room for the reader to place their own meaning and interpretation on the words - I�ll leave you to do it.

On the craft side to little pedantic things.
�on the ocean� - on the foreshore, or by the ocean
�...but yet...�, one or the other please!!