Reviewed by Janice

No Way Out is a story of onesided love, it leaves little to the imagination but is good writing just the same. I felt for the main character in this story, to love and not be loved is horrible at it's best.

The writer painted a good partial picture here that would be better if added to and given some sort of twist. I found it strange that Chris was at first so "pished" (so that's what it means!) that he passed out and was unable to talk and only what, in the story, seemed like a few moments later he was able to completely communicate his feelings.

The ending could be developed a bit and seemed to leave me each time I read it (3) with a bit of a let down. I think the story has promise and the writer has talent, so keep it up!