Reviewed by Kate

A very short piece, which could probably be best described as a prose poem. About love.

If the author wants to play with words, this is a good start. However, as my father says when asked for directions, with a serious look on his face, "You don't want to start from here." And to quote someone else, "If you feel tempted to write a poem about love, write a poem about a toaster." Unalloyed love is mostly interesting to the participants, and there needs to be some conflict/complications/interference to make it compelling for the reader.